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Below is a 350-word edition of a Personal Statement for an Industrial Design application: *** At my childhood kitchen table, was where I first fell in love with industrial design. I became infatuated with an ergonomic vegetable peeler. This tool demonstrates the power of good design. Its predecessors were metal, finger crushing tools. My peeler had a smooth, soft, and ribbed rubber grip that contoured perfectly to the human hand. For the first time, I understood that every object designed is purposeful, meant to aid and enhance human life. Combining my passions for art and engineering, with design I have found my calling, my purpose, and my profession: industrial design. Science and art pulled me in different directions during my formative years. I was analytical and enjoyed the understanding of the structures and functions of the world, however I also longed for the freedom to create. Finding Industrial Design was liberating. When I was learning this discipline, I understood that form and function could be complimentary. There is a plethora of inspiring, beautiful designs that meet the challenge of being intuitively designed and constructed, as well as being negligent of sustainability. I wish to study this profession to create a career for myself as the Linchpin between possibility and reality. I see design as having the potential to solve some of the problems we have as a society. The best design enhances accessibility. From producing inexpensive medical devices to designing comfortable work station furniture to packing consumer products in ways that don’t contribute to the growing ocean plastics problem, the opportunity for creating positive change through design is enormous. As an industrial designer, I hope to learn how to use a wide range of available design technologies, from CAD modeling to rapid prototype fabrication to an understanding of materials and their properties, and turn my ideas into meaningful and positive real-world creations. I see an emphasis on hands-on learning, especially in your school’s industrial design program. I enjoy the idea of working alongside my peers in the workshops and the opportunities that working in the unknown will bring about in regard to my ability to think creatively. I don’t want to design things that are merely aesthetically pleasing. I want my designs to enhance peoples’ quality of life by simplifying and improving everyday activities. Industrial design will help me channel my curiosity into a rewarding career path.