WriteHuman
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How do billions of individual neurons, each imperfect in some way, work together to produce human consciousness, memory, and behavior? This question is the root of my passion for computational neuroscience. Traditional biology and psychology provide an incomplete picture of the brain. Biology describes the physical structures of the brain. Psychology analyzes behavioral outputs, but I believe the jargon of the mind is found in the math of information processing. To solve this problem, we must study the brain as the most advanced computational system on the planet and in the universe, and not simply as a biological organ. Undergraduate studies made my interest clear when I came into contact with neural networks. I realized that complex cognitive phenomena can be thought of as optimization problems and so addressing them is a matter of biological intuition and computational rigor. Armed with these ideas, I modeled synaptic plasticity and sought out classes in linear algebra, probability and machine learning. I have a special interest in your program because of the cross-discipline nature of decoding neural circuits. Analysis of datasets is the start and I want to go further and develop biophysically realistic and predictive models of neural systems. I am especially excited to consider the potential of neural models in understanding the mechanisms underpinning circuit-disconnecting pathologies and other severe disorders like epilepsy and schizophrenia. Simulating neural circuits may provide insight in the identification of possible therapeutic targets for disorders which fall beyond the bounds of clinical consideration. I am also interested in the pathways and symbiotic relationship between neuroscience and artificial intelligence. Modeling the neural architectures of a highly energy efficient system and understanding the learning pathways of the brain will help develop more sophisticated and resilient machine learning systems. I want to become a leading researcher of the experimental and theoretical sciences and your program helps me realize my goals.